OUR REDEEM.

A sublime view of you.
So withstanding yet idyllic.
Such a bliss you give.
You’re a catalyst.

We slept deep in oblivion
on quilts of stars while
the lesson crawls.
With your words we
blithely ignored.
And the repugnance of
our deeds
that seemed so churlish
and inane.

Apologies will we render.
For our idol,
for you,
We will (illustrate our heartfelt gratitude)
We will (revere you)

You’re an inspiration
for our graduation.
Your arms will be
our duvets for eternity.
Your patience and
guidance were the
remedies when we
were being obtuse.

These words, an illustration
of our tribute to you
will dwell in our hearts.
And high hopes for yours too.

Your name shall be a byword for beauty.

correct and notify me if there's any error(s).
my english aint perfect.
and just in case you've been wondering
to whom this song will be addressed to,
well, its the teachers.
this song will be sung on teachers' day